Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.

  On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causes the radiation leak, we must think over using unclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose using unclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disaster such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creature’s life around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

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Below are the biographical information about the two important Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. Firstly, John Adams is an important person in the American Revolution the same as Thomas Jefferson. Besides, only was John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence but also Thomas Jefferson. Moreover, Thomas is a delegate to the continental Congress. Similarly, John is a delegate to the continental Congress. Furthermore, not only was John Adams a third president of United State but also Thomas. What’s more, Jefferson studied and practiced the same law as Thomas. The most important of all, both of them are the crucial president in the United State. Having the everlasting reputation in the world, John Adams as well as Thomas Jefferson will be admired by generation to generation.

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On account of the car accident happened yesterday on the su-min road, the police have to find out who is the troublemaker. As a result, they have to judge the two licenses below and find out who is the really troublemaker. However, there are some coincidences between the two. Below are short descriptions based on my comparisons about the information provided on their driver’s license. Firstly, Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eyes color are similar to Ann Friedman. What’s more, both of them are 5’ 3” height. Coincidentally, Stephanie’s birthday is on July 31^st the same as Ann’s. I hope that the police can catch the troublemaker as soon as possible.   

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I am hiring a new English Instructor for my school. On account of having many differences, Lynn and Debra are both so outstanding and qualified that it is hard for me to judge who is better. For me, they both have qualifications for the position and leave nothing to be desired, as a consequence, please you follow the two resumes below and lend me a helping hand. Firstly, Debra who has three academic degrees has more education and employment experience than Lynn. Secondly, compared with Debra, Lynn, who graduated form New York University, is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. Thirdly, receiving an excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Lynn quite stands out. Lastly, Debra who is major in French is a competitive swimmer. Based on the personal information above, please you give me some advice. Thanks for your help.      

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I am helping my friend to look for an apartment to share near campus. Below are the brief descriptions of apartments on the Internet. One of the apartments named Fairfax has large two bedrooms while the other named campus apt. only has one bedroom available immediately in large modern building. Although, both of them are near campus, they are different in many ways. First of all, Fairfax apt. is unfurnished whereas campus apt. is furnished. Furthermore, on account of pets being allowed at Fairfax apt. while they are not allowed at campus apt. if you feel like keeping a pet home, Fairfax is a better choice for you. Moreover, all utilities included at Fairfax apt. so that you don’t need to worry about it; however, campus apt. doesn’t have. There are important details that my friend must take them into account. Based on the information above, I believe that he can rent an excellent apartment for himself.    

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At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planed to have a dinner with my family at restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert. First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantasy as Cobayasi. Latest but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurants to go to, I hope that you can lend me a helping hand.          

My Favorite Movie-The Chronicles Of Narnia -revised

  Among all kinds of movies, I like the movie called The Chronicles Of Narnia the most, which is adapted from the novel written by the author, C.S. Lewis. And there are some brief descriptions about the content of it. It is an adventure story which consists of four main characters, telling of a journey to the edge of the world. All the roles, in the movie, are considered as heroes, who are in charge of struggling and fighting with testing evils, dealing with a wide variety of difficult challenges on their own. Besides, the story also tells how the characters gradually learn to overcome their own fear, greed as well as longing for what they want. For them, the journey is not only a trial of their courage but also of their ability to do the right thing. Perhaps that is the reason for which can be so attractive and appeal to readers ranging form the young to the old all over the world. In my opinion, the character that is the most fetching and touches my heart is Lucy because of her sympathy for the poor. She reaches out her hand to those who are in need without hesitation. All she has are trust, love, as well as belief which result in many miracles happening around themselves. For me, The Chronicles Of Narnia is so attractive and detailed that is worth watching; similarly, for me, it is the most perfect movies that I have ever watched.  

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I am searching for one of my best friends, Will, who got lost while taking a trip to the Arch of Triumph for a summer vacation with us last week. It was the day on Sunday, March 14 that he failed to get on our tour bus; unfortunately, he also left his travel guide on the tour bus. To our sorrow, we have not been able to contact with him for almost a week since he got lost; therefore, we need your help. There are some brief descriptions according to his appearance. He is average height, athletic, and sixteen-year-old or so. Besides, he has a big head with a blond, curly hair, wearing a polo shirt as well as jeans. He always wears a smile on his face with two deep dimples and he also has a mole in the middle of his forehead. Furthermore, he usually walks considerably quickly and hurriedly just likes a bee and always looks nervous when talking to others. We are worried badly about him and hope that he would be safe and sound.  If you see him, please call the number 0911-187-187; we are looking forward to your reply.