On account of the car accident happened yesterday on the su-min road, the police have to find out who is the troublemaker. As a result, they have to judge the two licenses below and find out who is the really troublemaker. However, there are some coincidences between the two. Below are short descriptions based on my comparisons about the information provided on their driver’s license. Firstly, Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eyes color are similar to Ann Friedman. What’s more, both of them are 5’ 3”
1.You describe too much in the introduction while the body of the paragraph seems to be insufficient to support the your main idea.
ReplyDelete2.the police have to find out who is the troublemaker.
-->the police have to find out who the troublemaker is.
3.they have to judge the two licenses below and find out who is the really troublemaker.
-->they have to judge the two licenses below and find out who the troublemaker is.
4.Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eyes color are similar to Ann Friedman.
-->Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eyes color are similar to Ann Friedman's.
5.both of them are 5’ 3” height.
-->both of them are 5’ 3” in height.