With an active and enthusiastic personality, I make lots of friends easily, participating in a variety of school competitions such as English writing contest, drawing competition, singing contest, dancing performance and so forth. During the process of preparing competition, not only did I do my utmost to win the highest prize but learn how to deal with difficulties by myself. Furthermore, little did I know I would be voted as a chief of general services, handling all the money recruited from the class. Even though I have never been in such service before, I have learned a precious experience from this. Also, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience. To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.
Tuesday, September 27, 2011
My Autography-school life+self evaluation
I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School , majoring in English. Since I was a child, I have been eager for being capable of speaking English, communicating with foreigners fluently. Therefore, I did my best level to strengthen my English ability by listening English songs, reading English newspaper, watching English programs. By doing so, I gradually progress myself in English, realizing my dream, being admitted to the school and study at Department of Applied Foreign English.During the process of my senior high school life, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the intermediate level.
With an active and enthusiastic personality, I make lots of friends easily, participating in a variety of school competitions such as English writing contest, drawing competition, singing contest, dancing performance and so forth. During the process of preparing competition, not only did I do my utmost to win the highest prize but learn how to deal with difficulties by myself. Furthermore, little did I know I would be voted as a chief of general services, handling all the money recruited from the class. Even though I have never been in such service before, I have learned a precious experience from this. Also, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience. To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.
With an active and enthusiastic personality, I make lots of friends easily, participating in a variety of school competitions such as English writing contest, drawing competition, singing contest, dancing performance and so forth. During the process of preparing competition, not only did I do my utmost to win the highest prize but learn how to deal with difficulties by myself. Furthermore, little did I know I would be voted as a chief of general services, handling all the money recruited from the class. Even though I have never been in such service before, I have learned a precious experience from this. Also, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience. To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.
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Therefore, I did my best level to strengthen my English ability by listening English songs, reading English newspaper, watching English programs. =>level 有需要嗎~應該不用吧??
ReplyDeleteAlso, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience.這句話有點冗長~我覺得可以分兩句或加個分號~
To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.=>To me~to sum up 感覺有種公事公辦的感覺~用在這邊很"文章"~
By doing so, I gradually progress myself in English, realizing my dream, being admitted to the school and study at Department of Applied Foreign English-->
ReplyDeleteI gradually make a lot of progress in English, realize my dream and be admitted to the school .Eventually I study at~~
at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience
PROGRESS沒有這樣的用法喔~
RROGRESS是名詞喔~
ReplyDeleteEnglish newspaper
ReplyDelete>>English newspapers
recruit是招募的意思喔
所以不太適合用在這裡~~
學校中的生活可以把球賽也打上去
還有和同儕和樂融融的相處會更colorful=ˇ=
感覺你的高中生活很多采多姿的說~
ReplyDelete有些感覺有點重複的感覺~
其他上面都說了!!!
XD~
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