As I believe that I will definitely major in English in the future, I do my utmost to sharpen my English ability so as to be admitted in National Taipei University of Technology. I will choose the department of foreign English for the professional teaching skills and wonderful environment there. When it comes to learning English, although now I have passed some English proficiency tests and get some certificates, I still practice it every day in order to keep familiar to it. Besides being proficient in English, I also expect that I can pass FLPT as well as TOPIK during my university school life. Furthermore, to broaden my horizon, I will seize very opportunities to study abroad and experience different culture life. Finally, after entering the society, I want to get a job related to my profession. I will make every effort to realize my dream.
I will choose the department of foreign English for the professional teaching skills and wonderful environment there.=>I would like to ~for its~
ReplyDeleteWhen it comes to learning English, although now I have passed some English proficiency tests and get some certificates, I still practice it every day in order to keep familiar to it.=>When it comes to和although放在一起不對~選其中一個放不然整句看起來很怪~不然你也可以加一個 -though~,I ~
Furthermore, to broaden my horizon, I will seize very opportunities to study abroad and experience different culture life. =>every~
Finally, after entering the society=>後面好像不會這樣用~像中文式英文~如果改成become a memeber of socity應該就可以~
整體來講我覺得還不錯~
ReplyDelete可是我覺得檢定的部分可以用大家比較熟悉的，
像FLPT可以改一下。
我知道TOPIK是韓語檢驗，可是在你的自傳中並沒有提到你這方面的學習，我認為有點突兀，可以在多想想要怎麼作修正。
I also expect that I can pass FLPT as well as TOPIK during my university school life.
ReplyDelete這句的確有點突兀~不然你可以在打些學習韓文的事~
整體很棒唷o__<
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