At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planed to have a dinner with my family at restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert. First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantasy as Cobayasi. Latest but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurants to go to, I hope that you can lend me a helping hand.
At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planed to have a dinner with my family at restaurant.=>at a restaurant
ReplyDeleteAs a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. =>which restaurant~ advices
Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as white-glove=>~ CollaBella=>which is~
the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert. =>the other one~
First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, =>~the foods in the ~nothing to be desired
they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantasy as Cobayasi. Latest but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. =>Last but~
文章還滿順暢的喔=)
空2格!!
ReplyDelete第一句 三餐要有修飾語才可數唷!
→ at (a) restaurant.
!!第一句時態跟下面搭不起來唷!
One (of the restaurants不要唷哈哈) named CollaBella is famous for their various (local這個字在這好怪) Italian foods(要又s嗎) as well as (its) white-glove; the other (is Cobayasi which→restaurants named Cobayasi) is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert.
First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, they are worth the price. 沒連接詞
Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantasy as Cobayasi.
!!the same fantasy ＠可以這樣用嗎＠?
Latest but not the least(last唷 哈哈哈), they all located at wonderful sites.
有邏輯XD 還很通順唷~~
At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planed to have a (special)dinner with my family at restaurant.
ReplyDelete加了形容詞能畫龍點睛喔=)
還有planned是不是要改成現在是阿~
One of the restaurants named CollaBella is ~ white-glove; the other is ~Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert.
這句的逗點前是不是要加連接詞阿!!!
像and之類的~
Latest but not the least,
是last喔~
這篇很通順而且故事也不錯~
比較用法也用得很好!!!
很期待下一篇喔=)
white-glove阿達VANCE有:D拉拉拉ADA好棒喔
ReplyDeleteLatest but not the least-->last你再重寫一篇好了(笑:)))))))))):))))))):))))))))
好多都是新學的用法
ada好棒喔～
xmas不用the
ReplyDelete餐廳前要有a
food不加s
as well as white-glove這句文法有錯誤喔
是as good as white-glove resturants
white-glove是複合形容詞 需要搭配名詞
dessert要s
leave nothing to be desire 是desired喔
fantasy是名詞是fantastic
連續出現兩次i hope that you can~~這個句型可以改一下別的說法喔
planed-->planned
ReplyDeleteAs a result of wondering which restaurants to choose-->As a result of wondering which restaurant to choose
One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as white-glove
as well as後應該要接同性質的東西
they all located at wonderful sites. -->they are all located at wonderful sites.
還不錯~有愈來愈好的趨勢喔
第一行後面 at restaurant 要改成 at a restaurant
ReplyDelete倒數第五行 First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, they are worth the price.
是to be desired 然後逗號後面忘了加連接詞
這篇寫的還滿不錯的~~
at restaurant -> at a restaurant
ReplyDeletesome advice-> some advices
white-glove 是形容詞喔
First of all可以改為 In addtion 因為已經不是第一點了
fantasy -> fantastic
Latest but not the least-> Last but not the least
which restaurants to go to-> which restaurant to go to
這次的文章我覺得還不錯欸!! 因為這次的文章有邏輯多了:))