Best of the semester-1-comparing-3(Choosing a restaurant)

　At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planned to have a dinner with my family at a restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as its white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite desserts. In addition, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desired, and they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantastic as Cobayasi. Last but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurant to go to, I will be looking forward to your helping hand.       

Best of the semester-２-Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis

　On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causing the radiation leak, we must think over using nuclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disasters such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creatures’ lives around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

Best of the semester-３-My Favorite Movie-The Chronicles Of Narnia

　Among all kinds of movies, I like the movie called The Chronicles Of Narnia the most, which is adapted from the novel written by the author, C.S. Lewis. And there are some brief descriptions about the content of it. It is an adventure story which consists of four main characters, telling of a journey to the edge of the world. All the roles, in the movie, are considered as heroes, who are in charge of struggling and fighting with testing evils, dealing with a wide variety of difficult challenges on their own. Besides, the story also tells how the characters gradually learn to overcome their own fear, greed as well as longing for what they want. For them, the journey is not only a trial of their courage but also of their ability to do the right thing. Perhaps that is the reason for which can be so attractive and appeal to readers ranging form the young to the old all over the world. In my opinion, the character that is the most fetching and touches my heart is Lucy because of her sympathy for the poor. She reaches out her hand to those who are in need without hesitation. All she has are trust, love, as well as belief which result in many miracles happening around themselves. For me, The Chronicles Of Narnia is so attractive and detailed that is worth watching; similarly, for me, it is the most perfect movies that I have ever watched.

Discussing effects-2 -revised

In our country, the government is looking forward to building a brand new factory in order to increase our country’s financial incomes. Yet, many local residents are against the project and below are the reasons for it. Although, the new factory will increase the population of our country, it may bring about various bad influences on our environment such as, air pollution, noise pollution as well as river pollution. Moreover, the dwellers in our country may be out of job, for the rate of immigration enormously increased. It causes the rate of stealing to dilate dramatically. What’s more, the people living in the country may separate from the crowd and be indifferent to their neighbors. Above is a list made from the people who discuss the issue of building a new factor in their town. I hope that the government will take their advice into account.

Discussing effects of getting married. -revised

  It goes without saying that getting married is an important decision in everyone’s life. It is because that getting married means that we have to live with our beloved husband once and for all. As a result, it is necessary for us to take several factors below into account in order to lead a pleasant future. To begin with, after getting married, we may have a hard time doing what we want to do, such us traveling, seeing movie and so forth. Taking care of little baby may occupy most of my free time. Moreover, based on scientific research, after giving birth to the third baby, our ability to memorize may decline rapidly far from our image. What’s more, we may do lot of self-sacrifice for our family. So, before we get married, it is important for us to consider it over and over again. 

Discussing cause-2-thinking of an important decision -revised

  It is needless to say that girls of our age look forward to finding true love, marrying their ideal sweethearts. Yet, a complete warm as well as fragrant family consists of several important factors. To begin with, taking the financial expenditure into account, they should marry the man who has steady incomes. Furthermore, it is necessary for them to control the daily running cost in their family. Moreover, characters are considerable significant effects if they can get along with their lovers. The most important thing is that both of them should have the same habit; otherwise, it will be problematic for them to live together. Getting married is so important that it can not be too careful to consider over and over again.

Discussing cause-1-giving the reasons-revised

  As a business administration student, after I investigate the condition of the market, finding that the music store opened by Michael Williams has some flaws. Below are the main reasons why the music store was out of business within two months. First of all, such are the CDs in the shopping center, three miles away, that it appeals to people ranging form the young to the old. Furthermore, it is unnecessary that Mr. Williams spent too much fund on buying CDs. Moreover, most of the consumers nearby aged 51-60 are not fond of hip-hop as well as rock. Besides, numbers of people who walk past the store are the most when it is on Sunday as well as Saturday; while, Mr. Williams’ shop is open Monday to Friday. No wonder the business is in the red and shut down ultimately. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that a successful business requires previous investigation of the market. And, it is also significant to take capital expenditure into account.

Discussing effects-2

  In our country, the government is looking forward to building a brand new factory in order to increase our country’s financial incomes. Yet, many local residents are against the project and below are the reasons for it. Although, the new factory will increase the population of our country, it may bring about various bad influences on our environment such as, air pollution, noise pollution as well as river pollution. Moreover, the dwellers in our country may be out of job, for the rate of immigration enormously increased. It causes the rate of stealing to dilate dramatically. What’s more, the people living in the country may separate from the crowd and indifferent to their neighbors. Above is a list made from the people who discus the issue of building a new factor in their town. I hope that the government will take their advice into account.

Discussing effects of getting married.

  It goes without saying that getting married is an important decision in everyone’s life.It is because that getting married means that we have to live with our beloved husband once and for all. As a result, it is necessary for us to take several factors below into account in order to lead a pleasure future. To begin with, after getting married, we may have a hard time with doing what we want to do, such us traveling, seeing movie and so forth. Taking care of little baby may occupy most of my free time. Moreover, based on scientific research, after giving birth to the third baby, our ability to memorize may decline rapidly far form our image. What’s more, we may do lot of self-sacrifice for our family. So, before we get married, it is important for us to consider it over and over again.  

Expressing an opinion why I agree with wearing uniforms for school.-reviesd

As a student, I am on the same page as those who are in favor of wearing the uniforms for school. Many students insist that wearing uniforms should be not necessary; yet, I strongly believe that wearing uniforms will make us look tidy and neat for its coherence. Some students may argue that it is troublesome to wear uniforms to school every day; whereas, as far as I am concerned, I regard uniforms as a symbol of our school. In addition, no one can argue against the fact that if we wear uniforms to school we don’t have to worry about what we should wear tomorrow. Because of there facts, it is self-evident that wearing uniforms to school is our best choice.

Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.-revised

On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causing the radiation leak, we must think over using nuclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disasters such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creatures’ lives around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

contrasting-2-revised

I am hiring a new English Instructor for my school. On account of having many differences, Lynn and Debra are both so outstanding and qualified that it is hard for me to judge who is better. For me, they both have qualifications for the position and leave nothing to be desired; as a consequence, please follow the two resumes below and compare the differences between them. Firstly, Debra, who has three academic degrees has more education and employment experience than Lynn. Secondly, compared with Debra, Lynn, who graduated form New York University, is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. Thirdly, receiving an excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Lynn quite stands out. Lastly, Debra who is major in French is a competitive swimmer as well. Based on the personal information above, I eventually make up my mind choosing Lynn as a new English Instructor for her major in a variety of languages.  

contrasting-1-revised

  I am helping my friend to look for an apartment to share near campus. Below are the brief descriptions of apartments on the Internet. One of the apartments named Fairfax has large two bedrooms while the other named Campus apt. only has one bedroom available. Although, both of them are near campus, they are different in many ways. First of all, Fairfax apt. is unfurnished whereas Campus apt. is furnished. Furthermore, on account of pets being allowed at Fairfax apt. while they are not allowed at Campus apt. if you feel like keeping a pet home, Fairfax is a better choice for you. Moreover, all utilities included at Fairfax apt. so that you don’t need to worry about it; however, Campus apt. doesn’t have. There are important details that my friend must take them into account. Based on the information above, I believe that he can rent an excellent apartment for himself.   

comparing-3-revised

    At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planned to have a dinner with my family at a restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as its white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite desserts. In addition, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desired, and they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantastic as Cobayasi. Last but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurant to go to, I will be looking forward to your helping hand.         

Discussing cause-1-giving the reasons

As a business administration student, after I investigate the condition of the market, finding that the music store opened by Michael Williams has some flaws. Below are the main reasons why the music store will be out of business within two months. First of all, such are the CDs in the shopping center, three miles away, that it appeals to people ranging form the young to the old. Furthermore, it is unnecessary that Mr. Williams spent too much fund on buying CDs. Moreover, most of the consumers nearby aged 51-60 are not fond of hip-hop as well as rocking roll. Besides, number of propel who walk past the store are the most when it is on Sunday as well as Saturday; while, Mr. Williams’ shop is open Monday to Friday. No wonder the business is in the red and shut down ultimately. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that a successful business requires previous investigation of the market. And, it is also significant to take capital expenditure into account.

Discussing cause-2-thinking of an important decision

  It is needless to say that girls of our age look forward to finding true love, marrying their ideal sweethearts. Yet, a complete as well as warm and fragrant family consists of several important factors. To begin with, taking the financial expenditure into account, they should marry the man who has steady incomes. Furthermore, it is necessary for them to control the daily running cost in their family. Moreover, characters are considerable significant effects if they can get along with their lovers. The most important thing is that both of them should have the same habit; otherwise, it will be problematic for them to live together. Getting marries is so important that it can not be too careful to consider over and over again.

Expressing an opinion why I agree with wearing uniforms to school.

  As a student, I am on the same page as those who are in favor of wearing the uniforms to school. Although, many students insist that wearing uniforms is not necessary, I strongly believe that wearing uniforms will have us look tidy and neat for its coherence. Some students may argue that it is troublesome to wear uniforms to school every day; whereas, as far as I am concerned, I regard uniforms as a symbol of our school. In addition, no one can argue against the fact that if we wear uniforms to school we don’t have to worry about what we should wear tomorrow. Because of there facts, it is self-evident that wearing uniforms to school is our best choice.