Future perspective

  As I believe that I will definitely major in English in the future, I do my utmost to sharpen my English ability so as to be admitted in National Taipei University of Technology. I will choose the department of foreign English for the professional teaching skills and wonderful environment there. When it comes to learning English, although now I have passed some English proficiency tests and get some certificates, I still practice it every day in order to keep familiar to it. Besides being proficient in English, I also expect that I can pass FLPT as well as TOPIK during my university school life. Furthermore, to broaden my horizon, I will seize very opportunities to study abroad and experience different culture life. Finally, after entering the society, I want to get a job related to my profession. I will make every effort to realize my dream.   

My Autography-school life+self evaluation -Revisd

  I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, majoring in English. Since I was a child, I have been eager for being capable of speaking English, communicating with foreigners fluently. Therefore, I did my best level to strengthen my English ability by listening English songs, reading English newspapers, watching English programs. By doing so, I gradually progress myself in English, realizing my  dream, being admitted to the school and study at Department of Applied Foreign English. During the process of my senior high school life, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the intermediate level.
  With an active and enthusiastic personality, I make lots of friends easily, participating in a variety of school competitions such as English writing contest, drawing competition, singing contest, dancing performance and so forth. During the process of preparing competition, not only did I do my utmost to win the highest prize but learn how to deal with difficulties by myself. Besides, with an active personality, I am fond of playing volley ball game with my friends after school. Therefore, it help my has a good relationship with our classmates as well as friends from the other departments of out school. Furthermore, little did I know I would be voted as a chief of general services, handling all the money raised from the class. Even though I have never been in such service before, I have learned a precious experience from this. Also, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school, knowing how to deal with everything through this experience. To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.

My Autography-family background -Revised

My name is Linyi Shen. I was born and raised in Tainan. I am now a senior high school student majoring in Department of Foreign Language in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Having a good personality, I am easy to get along with. There are four members in my family. Since I am the eldest child, it makes me an independent, responsible and mature person. As a result, I have to take care of my brother and do chores in daily life. Luckily, my brother who is a freshman in senior high is considerate as well as intelligent. Getting alone with each other, we occasionally hang out shopping together and playing puzzles such as Sudoku, monopoly and Tetris etc. Both of my parents take charge of private business to support our family income. They work diligently without complaining about their daily routine. I am fortunate to be born in such warm as well as pleasure family.

My Autography-school life+self evaluation

   I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, majoring in English. Since I was a child, I have been eager for being capable of speaking English, communicating with foreigners fluently. Therefore, I did my best level to strengthen my English ability by listening English songs, reading English newspaper, watching English programs. By doing so, I gradually progress myself in English, realizing my  dream, being admitted to the school and study at Department of Applied Foreign English.During the process of my senior high school life, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the intermediate level.

  With an active and enthusiastic personality, I make lots of friends easily, participating in a variety of school competitions such as English writing contest, drawing competition, singing contest, dancing performance and so forth. During the process of preparing competition, not only did I do my utmost to win the highest prize but learn how to deal with difficulties by myself. Furthermore, little did I know I would be voted as a chief of general services, handling all the money recruited from the class. Even though I have never been in such service before, I have learned a precious experience from this. Also, I sharpen my skill in coping with trivial things at school,knowing how to progress myself in doing everything through this experience. To sum up, my school life is cheerful and filled with happiness.

My Autography-family background

  My name is Linyi Shen. I was born and raised in Tainan. I am now a senior high school student majoring in Department of Foreign Language in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Having a good personality, I am easy to get along with. There are four members in my family. Since I am the eldest child, it makes me an independent, responsible and mature person. As a result, I have to take care of my brother and do choric in daily life. Luckily, my brother who is in a new senior high student is considerate as well as intelligent. Getting alone with each other, we occasionally hang out shopping together and playing puzzles such as Sudoku, monopoly and Tetris etc. Both of my parents take charge of private business to support our family income. They work diligently without complaining about their daily routine. It is fortunate for me to be born in such warm as well as pleasure family.

Autobiography-sample one

  I was born and raised in Maioli City. Having a good temper, I am easy to get along with. Being responsible, I always ask myself to run for better. There are five members in my family. Both of my parents are retired. One of my elder brothers takes charge of import and export business in ASUS company. The other is a computer-science author.

It’s fortunate for me on the road of learning. In school days, I learned what I should learn. That really helped me while doing research in graduate school. My professor, Kim, taught me no matter how complicated the work was, I could find the key through the basic theory. In these two years, I started from basic mechanics. Then, our lab-team research and design a largest flat-loudspeaker all over the world. At last, I got a case of analyzing vibration behaviors of a cone-type loudspeaker from a company. That became my graduate thesis. Upon the above, I combined the theory, experiments, and life together. I grew up, and I knew I got what I want. The R&D work would be my future occupation. Thanks, my teacher.

Starting from two roommates in mems’ lab, I got some information about mems. I began to be interested in the micro-world. With taking some courses about semi-conductor and reading some books about mems, I got some about this field. I know I do like to learn this kind of knowledge and skills. I know the micro-mechanics system will be the next star in the future.

A smooth and stable life is the one I beg. It’s almost impossible for me to strive for fame and wealth. Besides, I am filled with ambition to be a good researcher. That’s why I choose this job. I think this job and its circumstance can give me what I want. I wish I could join your team. I will do my best to contribute myself here.

Autobiography-sample two

   I am Mark Huang, a second-year senior high school student. I am seventeen-year-old. I am from a well-to-do family. I am the eldest child of three. My father and mother run a trading company; my younger sister is in junior high school and our baby brother goes to elementary school. Since I am the eldest child, it makes me an independent, responsible and mature person.

I have great interests in computer. I have played with computer for almost seven years. My computer skill is superb. My friends always come to me for their computer problems.

I know how to set up a website and make flash animations. Currently I have my own website sharing my habits and interests with people around the world. My website is mainly about topics of computer, basketball and movies. I also make lots of funny flash cartoons on basketball.

I have met many web friends from many countries. We exchange information, ideas, school lives and academic problems. We have to communicate with one another in English, thus after these years of practicing English, it certainly helps me a lot in English and I become the top student in English course. Not to mention I am already the No.1 student in computer field.

In order to prepare myself for the E-era and be able to apple my interest and specialty into the workplace, I decide to major in computer science to enhance my computer skill and knowledge and learn how to design programs that will bring people efficiency and convenience in the 21st century.

With my computer and English ability, I am confident in myself to do well in computer field. Wish you could give me a chance to prove it. I am eager to be one of programmer who helps our society to do development and research on information and technology in this cutting edge.

Best of the semester-1-comparing-3(Choosing a restaurant)

　At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planned to have a dinner with my family at a restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as its white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite desserts. In addition, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desired, and they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantastic as Cobayasi. Last but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurant to go to, I will be looking forward to your helping hand.       

Best of the semester-２-Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis

　On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causing the radiation leak, we must think over using nuclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disasters such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creatures’ lives around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

Best of the semester-３-My Favorite Movie-The Chronicles Of Narnia

　Among all kinds of movies, I like the movie called The Chronicles Of Narnia the most, which is adapted from the novel written by the author, C.S. Lewis. And there are some brief descriptions about the content of it. It is an adventure story which consists of four main characters, telling of a journey to the edge of the world. All the roles, in the movie, are considered as heroes, who are in charge of struggling and fighting with testing evils, dealing with a wide variety of difficult challenges on their own. Besides, the story also tells how the characters gradually learn to overcome their own fear, greed as well as longing for what they want. For them, the journey is not only a trial of their courage but also of their ability to do the right thing. Perhaps that is the reason for which can be so attractive and appeal to readers ranging form the young to the old all over the world. In my opinion, the character that is the most fetching and touches my heart is Lucy because of her sympathy for the poor. She reaches out her hand to those who are in need without hesitation. All she has are trust, love, as well as belief which result in many miracles happening around themselves. For me, The Chronicles Of Narnia is so attractive and detailed that is worth watching; similarly, for me, it is the most perfect movies that I have ever watched.

Discussing effects-2 -revised

In our country, the government is looking forward to building a brand new factory in order to increase our country’s financial incomes. Yet, many local residents are against the project and below are the reasons for it. Although, the new factory will increase the population of our country, it may bring about various bad influences on our environment such as, air pollution, noise pollution as well as river pollution. Moreover, the dwellers in our country may be out of job, for the rate of immigration enormously increased. It causes the rate of stealing to dilate dramatically. What’s more, the people living in the country may separate from the crowd and be indifferent to their neighbors. Above is a list made from the people who discuss the issue of building a new factor in their town. I hope that the government will take their advice into account.

Discussing effects of getting married. -revised

  It goes without saying that getting married is an important decision in everyone’s life. It is because that getting married means that we have to live with our beloved husband once and for all. As a result, it is necessary for us to take several factors below into account in order to lead a pleasant future. To begin with, after getting married, we may have a hard time doing what we want to do, such us traveling, seeing movie and so forth. Taking care of little baby may occupy most of my free time. Moreover, based on scientific research, after giving birth to the third baby, our ability to memorize may decline rapidly far from our image. What’s more, we may do lot of self-sacrifice for our family. So, before we get married, it is important for us to consider it over and over again. 

Discussing cause-2-thinking of an important decision -revised

  It is needless to say that girls of our age look forward to finding true love, marrying their ideal sweethearts. Yet, a complete warm as well as fragrant family consists of several important factors. To begin with, taking the financial expenditure into account, they should marry the man who has steady incomes. Furthermore, it is necessary for them to control the daily running cost in their family. Moreover, characters are considerable significant effects if they can get along with their lovers. The most important thing is that both of them should have the same habit; otherwise, it will be problematic for them to live together. Getting married is so important that it can not be too careful to consider over and over again.

Discussing cause-1-giving the reasons-revised

  As a business administration student, after I investigate the condition of the market, finding that the music store opened by Michael Williams has some flaws. Below are the main reasons why the music store was out of business within two months. First of all, such are the CDs in the shopping center, three miles away, that it appeals to people ranging form the young to the old. Furthermore, it is unnecessary that Mr. Williams spent too much fund on buying CDs. Moreover, most of the consumers nearby aged 51-60 are not fond of hip-hop as well as rock. Besides, numbers of people who walk past the store are the most when it is on Sunday as well as Saturday; while, Mr. Williams’ shop is open Monday to Friday. No wonder the business is in the red and shut down ultimately. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that a successful business requires previous investigation of the market. And, it is also significant to take capital expenditure into account.

Discussing effects-2

  In our country, the government is looking forward to building a brand new factory in order to increase our country’s financial incomes. Yet, many local residents are against the project and below are the reasons for it. Although, the new factory will increase the population of our country, it may bring about various bad influences on our environment such as, air pollution, noise pollution as well as river pollution. Moreover, the dwellers in our country may be out of job, for the rate of immigration enormously increased. It causes the rate of stealing to dilate dramatically. What’s more, the people living in the country may separate from the crowd and indifferent to their neighbors. Above is a list made from the people who discus the issue of building a new factor in their town. I hope that the government will take their advice into account.

Discussing effects of getting married.

  It goes without saying that getting married is an important decision in everyone’s life.It is because that getting married means that we have to live with our beloved husband once and for all. As a result, it is necessary for us to take several factors below into account in order to lead a pleasure future. To begin with, after getting married, we may have a hard time with doing what we want to do, such us traveling, seeing movie and so forth. Taking care of little baby may occupy most of my free time. Moreover, based on scientific research, after giving birth to the third baby, our ability to memorize may decline rapidly far form our image. What’s more, we may do lot of self-sacrifice for our family. So, before we get married, it is important for us to consider it over and over again.  

Expressing an opinion why I agree with wearing uniforms for school.-reviesd

As a student, I am on the same page as those who are in favor of wearing the uniforms for school. Many students insist that wearing uniforms should be not necessary; yet, I strongly believe that wearing uniforms will make us look tidy and neat for its coherence. Some students may argue that it is troublesome to wear uniforms to school every day; whereas, as far as I am concerned, I regard uniforms as a symbol of our school. In addition, no one can argue against the fact that if we wear uniforms to school we don’t have to worry about what we should wear tomorrow. Because of there facts, it is self-evident that wearing uniforms to school is our best choice.

Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.-revised

On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causing the radiation leak, we must think over using nuclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disasters such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creatures’ lives around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

contrasting-2-revised

I am hiring a new English Instructor for my school. On account of having many differences, Lynn and Debra are both so outstanding and qualified that it is hard for me to judge who is better. For me, they both have qualifications for the position and leave nothing to be desired; as a consequence, please follow the two resumes below and compare the differences between them. Firstly, Debra, who has three academic degrees has more education and employment experience than Lynn. Secondly, compared with Debra, Lynn, who graduated form New York University, is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. Thirdly, receiving an excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Lynn quite stands out. Lastly, Debra who is major in French is a competitive swimmer as well. Based on the personal information above, I eventually make up my mind choosing Lynn as a new English Instructor for her major in a variety of languages.  

contrasting-1-revised

  I am helping my friend to look for an apartment to share near campus. Below are the brief descriptions of apartments on the Internet. One of the apartments named Fairfax has large two bedrooms while the other named Campus apt. only has one bedroom available. Although, both of them are near campus, they are different in many ways. First of all, Fairfax apt. is unfurnished whereas Campus apt. is furnished. Furthermore, on account of pets being allowed at Fairfax apt. while they are not allowed at Campus apt. if you feel like keeping a pet home, Fairfax is a better choice for you. Moreover, all utilities included at Fairfax apt. so that you don’t need to worry about it; however, Campus apt. doesn’t have. There are important details that my friend must take them into account. Based on the information above, I believe that he can rent an excellent apartment for himself.   

comparing-3-revised

    At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planned to have a dinner with my family at a restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as its white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite desserts. In addition, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desired, and they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantastic as Cobayasi. Last but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurant to go to, I will be looking forward to your helping hand.         

Discussing cause-1-giving the reasons

As a business administration student, after I investigate the condition of the market, finding that the music store opened by Michael Williams has some flaws. Below are the main reasons why the music store will be out of business within two months. First of all, such are the CDs in the shopping center, three miles away, that it appeals to people ranging form the young to the old. Furthermore, it is unnecessary that Mr. Williams spent too much fund on buying CDs. Moreover, most of the consumers nearby aged 51-60 are not fond of hip-hop as well as rocking roll. Besides, number of propel who walk past the store are the most when it is on Sunday as well as Saturday; while, Mr. Williams’ shop is open Monday to Friday. No wonder the business is in the red and shut down ultimately. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that a successful business requires previous investigation of the market. And, it is also significant to take capital expenditure into account.

Discussing cause-2-thinking of an important decision

  It is needless to say that girls of our age look forward to finding true love, marrying their ideal sweethearts. Yet, a complete as well as warm and fragrant family consists of several important factors. To begin with, taking the financial expenditure into account, they should marry the man who has steady incomes. Furthermore, it is necessary for them to control the daily running cost in their family. Moreover, characters are considerable significant effects if they can get along with their lovers. The most important thing is that both of them should have the same habit; otherwise, it will be problematic for them to live together. Getting marries is so important that it can not be too careful to consider over and over again.

Expressing an opinion why I agree with wearing uniforms to school.

  As a student, I am on the same page as those who are in favor of wearing the uniforms to school. Although, many students insist that wearing uniforms is not necessary, I strongly believe that wearing uniforms will have us look tidy and neat for its coherence. Some students may argue that it is troublesome to wear uniforms to school every day; whereas, as far as I am concerned, I regard uniforms as a symbol of our school. In addition, no one can argue against the fact that if we wear uniforms to school we don’t have to worry about what we should wear tomorrow. Because of there facts, it is self-evident that wearing uniforms to school is our best choice.

Expressing an opinion why I object to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.

  On account of the enormous earthquake in Japan causes the radiation leak, we must think over using unclear power. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same page as those who oppose using unclear power to solve the energy crisis. Some may argue that using unclear provides us with a great deal of energy; while there are some flaws that may bring about bad influences on our human beings. To begin with, building a nuclear power plant requires a great deal of government’s financial support. Furthermore, some nature disaster such as tsunami, earthquake and so forth will possibly cause the radiation leak and threaten creature’s life around the world. What’s more, owing to the release of radiation, there are still some severe problems that people have to deal with. For instance, human beings may get cancer unfortunately due to the radiation and plants in the region of the radiation may have gene mutation. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I object to use unclear power to solve the energy crisis.

comparing-2-revised

Below are the biographical information about the two important Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. Firstly, John Adams is an important person in the American Revolution the same as Thomas Jefferson. Besides, only was John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence but also Thomas Jefferson. Moreover, Thomas is a delegate to the continental Congress. Similarly, John is a delegate to the continental Congress. Furthermore, not only was John Adams a third president of United State but also Thomas. What’s more, Jefferson studied and practiced the same law as Thomas. The most important of all, both of them are the crucial president in the United State. Having the everlasting reputation in the world, John Adams as well as Thomas Jefferson will be admired by generation to generation.

comparing 1-revised

On account of the car accident happened yesterday on the su-min road, the police have to find out who is the troublemaker. As a result, they have to judge the two licenses below and find out who is the really troublemaker. However, there are some coincidences between the two. Below are short descriptions based on my comparisons about the information provided on their driver’s license. Firstly, Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eyes color are similar to Ann Friedman. What’s more, both of them are 5’ 3” height. Coincidentally, Stephanie’s birthday is on July 31^st the same as Ann’s. I hope that the police can catch the troublemaker as soon as possible.   

contrasting-2

I am hiring a new English Instructor for my school. On account of having many differences, Lynn and Debra are both so outstanding and qualified that it is hard for me to judge who is better. For me, they both have qualifications for the position and leave nothing to be desired, as a consequence, please you follow the two resumes below and lend me a helping hand. Firstly, Debra who has three academic degrees has more education and employment experience than Lynn. Secondly, compared with Debra, Lynn, who graduated form New York University, is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. Thirdly, receiving an excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, Lynn quite stands out. Lastly, Debra who is major in French is a competitive swimmer. Based on the personal information above, please you give me some advice. Thanks for your help.      

contrasting-1

I am helping my friend to look for an apartment to share near campus. Below are the brief descriptions of apartments on the Internet. One of the apartments named Fairfax has large two bedrooms while the other named campus apt. only has one bedroom available immediately in large modern building. Although, both of them are near campus, they are different in many ways. First of all, Fairfax apt. is unfurnished whereas campus apt. is furnished. Furthermore, on account of pets being allowed at Fairfax apt. while they are not allowed at campus apt. if you feel like keeping a pet home, Fairfax is a better choice for you. Moreover, all utilities included at Fairfax apt. so that you don’t need to worry about it; however, campus apt. doesn’t have. There are important details that my friend must take them into account. Based on the information above, I believe that he can rent an excellent apartment for himself.    

comparing-3

At the night leading up to the Christmas, I planed to have a dinner with my family at restaurant. As a result of wondering which restaurants to choose, I hope that you can give me some advice. Below are the brief descriptions according to the two restaurants. One of the restaurants named CollaBella is famous for their various local Italian foods as well as white-glove; the other is Cobayasi which is known for its delicious Japanese food as well as its exquisite dessert. First of all, the food in the two restaurants both leave nothing to be desire, they are worth the price. Furthermore, the atmosphere at CollaBella is the same fantasy as Cobayasi. Latest but not the least, they all located at wonderful sites. Having no idea about choosing which restaurants to go to, I hope that you can lend me a helping hand.          

My Favorite Movie-The Chronicles Of Narnia -revised

  Among all kinds of movies, I like the movie called The Chronicles Of Narnia the most, which is adapted from the novel written by the author, C.S. Lewis. And there are some brief descriptions about the content of it. It is an adventure story which consists of four main characters, telling of a journey to the edge of the world. All the roles, in the movie, are considered as heroes, who are in charge of struggling and fighting with testing evils, dealing with a wide variety of difficult challenges on their own. Besides, the story also tells how the characters gradually learn to overcome their own fear, greed as well as longing for what they want. For them, the journey is not only a trial of their courage but also of their ability to do the right thing. Perhaps that is the reason for which can be so attractive and appeal to readers ranging form the young to the old all over the world. In my opinion, the character that is the most fetching and touches my heart is Lucy because of her sympathy for the poor. She reaches out her hand to those who are in need without hesitation. All she has are trust, love, as well as belief which result in many miracles happening around themselves. For me, The Chronicles Of Narnia is so attractive and detailed that is worth watching; similarly, for me, it is the most perfect movies that I have ever watched.  

Descriping a person- revised

I am searching for one of my best friends, Will, who got lost while taking a trip to the Arch of Triumph for a summer vacation with us last week. It was the day on Sunday, March 14 that he failed to get on our tour bus; unfortunately, he also left his travel guide on the tour bus. To our sorrow, we have not been able to contact with him for almost a week since he got lost; therefore, we need your help. There are some brief descriptions according to his appearance. He is average height, athletic, and sixteen-year-old or so. Besides, he has a big head with a blond, curly hair, wearing a polo shirt as well as jeans. He always wears a smile on his face with two deep dimples and he also has a mole in the middle of his forehead. Furthermore, he usually walks considerably quickly and hurriedly just likes a bee and always looks nervous when talking to others. We are worried badly about him and hope that he would be safe and sound.  If you see him, please call the number 0911-187-187; we are looking forward to your reply.

comparing-1

Below are short descriptions based on my comparisons on the information provided on their driver’s license. Firstly, Stephanie Brooks’ hair color and eye color are similar to Ann Friedman. What’s more, both of them are 5’ 3” height. Coincidentally, Stephanie’s birthday is on July 31^st the same as Ann’s.   

comparing - 2

Below are the biographical information about the two important Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. Firstly, John Adams is an important person in the American Revolution the same as Thomas Jefferson. Besides, they both delegated to the continental Congress. Furthermore, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence like Thomas Jefferson. What’s more, not only was John Adams a third president of United State but also Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. The most important of all, both of them are the great president in United State.  

My Favorite Movie-The Chronicles Of Narnia

Among all kinds of movies, I like the movie called The Chronicles Of Narnia the most, which is adapted from the novel written by the author, C.S. Lewis. And there are some brief descriptions about the content of it. It is an adventure story which consists of four main characters, telling of a journey to the edge of the world. All the roles, in the movie, are considered to be heroes, who are in charge of struggling and fighting with testing evils, deal with a wide variety of difficult challenges on their own. Besides, the story also tells the ways how the characters gradually learn to overcome their own fear, greed as well as longing for what they want. For them, the journey is not only a trial of their courage but also of their ability to do the right thing. Perhaps that is the reason which can be so attractive and appeal to readers ranged form young to old all around the world.

In my term, when it comes to the most fetching  plot that touches my heart considerably most, is one of the characters, Lucy’s, sympathy for the poor. In the story, she reaches out her hand without hesitation when they need help. All she has are trust, love, as well as belief which results in many miracles happening around themselves. For me, The Chronicles Of Narnia is so full and detailed that it is worth watching; similarly,for me, it is the most perfect movies that I have ever watched.   

How to plan a birthday party for our best friend-revised

It goes without saying that everyone feels like having an impressive birthday gift. There are some useful ways for us that we can hold a surprising birthday party for our best friends in order to make them have an unforgettable birthday experience. Below are the ways how to prepare a perfect birthday party for our best friends. To begin with, all we can do is to buy food and some decoration for the party such as balloons, ribbons, gifts and so on. Then we can invite all our friends to the birthday party. Moreover, it is necessary for us to prepare a gift for the star of longevity to show our sincerity. Then, we can set forth decorating the room and begin preparing loads of delicacies and dessert, including puddings, chocolate cakes, drinks etcetera. Besides, it is also important for us to prepare some entertainment, such as singing and dancing recreational programs. Last but not the least, it is also important for us to remember to go to the party on time. The more we abide by the ways, the more possible we can have a wonderful and unforgettable memory.

Describing a person

I am searching for one of my best friends, Will, who got lost while taking a trip to the Arch of Triumph for a summer vacation with our family last week. It was the day on Sunday, March 14 that he failed to get on our tour bus; unfortunately, he also left his travel guide on the tour bus. To our sorrow, we had not been able to contact him for almost a week since he got lost; therefore, we need your help. There are some brief descriptions according to his appearance. He is average height, athletic, and sixteen-year-old or so. Besides, he has a big head with a blond, curly hair, wearing a polo shirt as well as jeans. He always wears a smile on his face with two deep dimples and he also has a mole in the middle of his forehead. Furthermore, he used to walk considerably quickly and hurriedly just likes a bee and always  looks nervous when talking to others. We are worry badly about him and hope that he would be safe and sound.  If you see him, please call the number 0911-187-187; we are looking forward to your reply.

How to plan a birthday party for your best friend

It goes without saying that everyone feel like having an impressive birthday gift.

As a result we can hold a surprising birthday party for our best friends in order to make them have an unforgettable birthday. Below are the ways how to prepare a perfect birthday party for them. To begin with, all we can to is to buy food and some decoration for the party such as balloons, ribbons, gifts and so on. Then we should invite all our friends to the birthday party and enjoy the good time. Moreover, it is necessary for everyone to prepare a gift for the star of longevity to show their sincerity. Then, we could set forth decorating the room and begin to prepare loads of delicious delicacies and dessert, including puddings, chocolate cakes and drinks etcetera. Besides, it is also important for us to prepare some entertainment, such as singing and dancing recreational programs. Furthermore, we should always wear a big smile on our face during the party. Least but not the least, after the party, we need to clean up the room and wipe out the trash. In order to plan a wonderful birthday party for your friend, we should abide by the ways and we could all have a wonderful and unforgettable memory.

Explaining a Process-3

　By means of following the tips below, you can get from the Visitor Center from Free Quaker Meeting House. To begin with, go down the Chestnut Street for three blocks and turn right. Then, keep on going down the Sixth Streetfor a block. Last, the Free Quaker Meeting House is on the corner of Sixth Streetand Market Street.    

Explaining a Process-2

　You can implement an experience to show that black is a better collector of solar energy than white. All you have to prepare are 2 tin cans, black and white paint, and room thermometer. Firstly, you need to paint the cans-one black, one white and filling   each can with water. Secondly, you need to put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours to absorb the sunlight. Thirdly, you have to check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare each one with care. Finally, by means of carrying out such an experiment, you will find that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher than white one.        

Explaining a Process-1

　Following the tips below and pot a plant on your own. It is easy for you to grow a plant if you follow the right procedure. In the first place, you should cover bottom of pot with small stones, and putting two inches of soil on top of rocks. In the second place, trying to make a hole in center of soil and dropping plant into soil. In the third place, you should carefully press soil down of pot with small stones. Finally, you should water plant appropriately. Growing a plant on your own is not a difficult work for you anymore if you abide by the regulations and take care of it carefully.

An embarrassing experience- Revised

　We must  have had an impressive experience which was not only embarrassing but unforgettable. This morning , I got up late and failed to catch the bus. As a result , I rode my bike to school. On the way to school, an car accident happened and I got hurt. Luckily, a woman who passed by gave me a hand and took me to hospital immediately . Because of wearing few clothes, I felt a little dizzy and had a sour throat and I guessed that I must catch a cold. Afterwards, I took a rest for a few hours and wert back to school . But everything went from bad to worse and, during the class, I began to cough loudly and badly. Everyone in the class looked at me in a disgusted way. It was really not my day；everything seemed to be wrong. In sum, it was such an embarrassing experience for me that I could not forget in my life.

An embarrassing experience

　We must once have an impressive experience which is embarrasing and unforgettable. This morning , I got up late and failed to cought the bus. As a result , I rode my bike to school. On the way to school, an accident  car happened and I got hurt. Luckily, a woman who passed by gave me a hand and took me to school. However, I felt a little dizzy and had a sour throat, I guessed that I must cought a cold. I took a rest for a few hours during the class. But, everything worsened, I began to cough loudly and badly. Everyone in the class looked at me in a disgusted way. It was really not my day；everything seemed to be wrong. In sum, it was such an embarrasing experience for me that I could not forget in my life.

The most impressive experience on school festival -Revised

　As the proverb goes,“No pain, no gain.” Tom ,a senior high school student,had practiced hard since he failed to take first prize in a race competition on school festival. Since then, he had made up his mind to wipe away the former humiliation in the same competition next year and had stayed at school all day long to practice a lot. This behavior had lasted for almost three months. It was the very day that the running competition began. Hearing a lot of cheers from his friends as well as his classmates, Tom ran as fast as he could. Eventually, he succeeded and won the championship.  With that being said, he got hurt after an intensely running in the process. Fortunately, after he took a rest for a long period of time, he could walk as normally as usual. As a proverb goes, “God helps those who help themselves.” Before we succeed, we should practice as hard as we could. Most importantly , Tom’s efforts eventually paid off.

The most impressive experience on school festival

　“God helps those who help themselves” Tom has practiced hard since one year ago when he failed to take first prize in running competition on school festival. From that day on, he made up his mind to win first prize in the same competition next year. Since then, he has stayed at school all day long and practiced a lot for almost three months. Furthermore, he kept improving running skills and practicing a lot . It was the very day that the running competition began. Hearing a lot of cheers from his friends as well as his classmates, Tom ran as fast as he could. Eventually, he succeeded and won first prize. With that being said, he got hurt after an intensely running in the process. Fortunately, he took a rest for a long period of time, and he could walk as normally as usual. As a proverb goes, “No pains, no gains.” Before we succeed, we should practice as hard as we could.Most importantly , Tom’s efforts eventually paid off.